A triolet by Roy Ramsay
The birds that fly toward the guns
Are hoping to be fed
They have not seen too many suns
The birds that fly towards the guns,
These men have fed them in their runs,
Supplied their daily bread.
The birds that fly towards the guns
Are hoping to be fed.
This is a perfect (to my mind) execution of a triolet. Well done Roy!!
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